From: Starr, Ken Sent: Tuesday, November 29, 2016 3:27 PM To: Jeffrey E. Subject: Re: Follow up Thank you! You're a prince. Good points. A professional editor is =hewing on it as I write. Disagree re off campus. Hugely releva=t. Gratefully, Ken Sent from my iPhone On Nov 29, 2016, at 8:08 AM, jeffrey E. <[email protected] <mailto:jeevacation@g=ail.com> wrote: needs editing. . he didnt protest his in=ocence he proclaimed it.. too many flowery adjectives.&=bsp; takes away from fact. not even NO THERE was not a rape cu=ture, . a firm denial. , suggesting sam didnt do w=ll in high school irrelevant. . stressing off campus, too factual and not =he issue . just a few thoughts On Tue, Nov 29, 2016 at 8:44 AM, Starr, Ken > wrote: Jeffrey: With renewed thanks for your hospitality last week, =ere's the chapter we discussed. You're very kind to look=at it. I've circled back to the lawyers re the concer= you mentioned. We'll see, but I predict a green light. =nd it would be a two-edged sword, and they know it. No word from our friends beyond the seas. <=u> Cheers, Ken EFTA_R1_00107633 EFTA01785473