From: Darren Indyke To: Lesley Groff Subject: Re: Japanese Visa Docs-please review ASAP Date: Thu, 23 Apr 2015 22:01:03 +0000 A couple of grammatical nits but probably not worth correcting them. But here they are in case. Both nits are in the Letter of Reason for Invitation for each of the girls. The two nits are: in paragraph (1) in the clause that starts on the second line midway on the line with "Interested in launching in Japan as well and bringing Japanese startups to the US." To make it correct, I would change "as well and" to "as well as". In paragraph (2) in the third line down in the paragraph starting with "the visa applicant's company has been seeking for collaboration on investments in startups in Japan." I would change "seeking for collaboration" to "seeking collaboration". Nothing else jumped out at me. I am revising the letters and will send them to you separately. Thanks. DARREN K. INDYKE DARREN K. INDYKE, PLLC 575 Lexington Avenue, 4th Floor New York, New York 10022 email: The infommtion contained in this communication is confidential, may be attorney-client privileged, and is intended only for the use of the addressee. It is the property of Darren K. Indyke, PLLC. Unauthorized use, disclosure or copying of this communication or any part thereof is strictly prohibited and may be unlawful. If you have received this communication in error, please notify us immediately by return e-mail, and destroy this communication and all copies thereof, including all attachments. Copyright of Darren K. Indyke, PLLC - 2015 Darren K. Indyke, PLLC — All rights reserved. On Apr 23, 2015, at 11:43 AM, Lesley Groff < > wrote: EFTA00348967