From: (USANYS)" To: Subject: RE: Maxwell MILs Date: Thu, 14 Oct 2021 16:03:05 +0000 Attachments: Government MIL v1 for chiefs - TAM.docx Here are my proposed edits and comments. A bunch of my comments are the same as yours, or propose ways to address things you flagged — but I do think at least some of your comments are outstanding. Rather than me trying to decide which ones need further response, would you like to take a look at this and then add any additional comments? From: Sent: Thursday, October 14, 2021 9:09 AM To: (USANYS) Subject: RE: Maxwell MILs Ok, if helpful, my comment bubbles are in the attached. From: (USANYS) < Sent: Wednesday, October 13, 2021 11:36 PM To: Subject: RE: Maxwell MILs I just read through them in hard copy, and then am going to suggest some changes in track tomorrow (if we ever have time between what is now a packed calendar). I'm happy to add them on top of yours, or send to you when done, either way. From: Sent: Wednesday, October 13, 2021 6:53 PM To: (USANYS) Subject: RE: Maxwell MILs I've taken a first pass through the MILs. I didn't line edit, figuring you would do so, but put general comments in bubbles for certain sections/arguments. I can forward that to you, or wait until I see your comments and add any of mine that remain. Overall I think it could be tighter but they are on the right track. From: (USANYS) < Sent: Wednesday, October 13, 2021 5:07 PM To: Cc: (USANYS) Subject: RE: Maxwell MILs Thanks, looking forward to reading. From: Sent: Wednesday, October 13, 2021 5:03 PM To: (USANYS) Cc: (USANYS) Subject: Maxwell MILs >; •= > •= > EFTA00065492