From: To: Subject: RE: brief Date: Sun, 12 Jul 2020 17:57:36 +0000 Attachments: 2020-07-12_GM_detention_reply_brief (MC_÷_AR).docx This looks great. Overall very strong, and great new paragraph addition by too. I made a bunch of small formatting changes, and shortened one cite, and otherwise no comments at all. Onward. From: Sent: Sunda Jul 12, 2020 13:45 To: Cc: Subject: Re: brief Thanks for flipping this so quickly, and really appreciate the team effort on this. any comments? Sent from my iPhone On Jul 12, 2020, at 1:41 PM, rote: Attached with my proposed edits (mostly nits and the addition of the paragraph I emailed about earlier). Thanks so much for all your incredible work on this,— From• Sent: Sunday, July 12, 2020 1:22 PM To Cc: Subject: Re: brief Will do, and on my list this afternoon to do some other stuff like that that you asked earlier. I'm gonna log on in ten and read first and then the other stuff and then circle up. Sent from my iPhone On Jul 12, 2020, at 13:17, wrote: could you please save the slip-and-fall deposition here: Thanks. From: Sent: Sunda , Jul 12, 2020 1:09 PM To: Cc Subject: Re: brief EFTA00024479